Man: Who is there?
(Silence)
Man: I know you're there.
(Silence)
Man: Who are you?
(Silence)
Man: What are you doing here?
Shadow: I am hungry.
Man: You are hungry? That's why you break into my home?
Shadow: I have no choice.
Man: I'll give you ten seconds to get out of my house, or I'll call the police.
Shadow: That won't be necessary... I do not obey your kind.
Man: Haha my kind? What kind of person are you?
Shadow: I'm not.
Man: ... Just get out of my house!
Shadow: I will not leave, I have not done what I have come for.
Man: And what is that?
Shadow: I need to collect.
Man: Collect what? Food?
Shadow: ...Souls...
Man: Haha... souls! It's in the middle of the night, stop playing jokes!
Shadow: No jokes...
Man: No jokes? Haha. How do I know if it's not a joke?
Shadow: Look at me... and lose your soul.
Man: Haha fine, I'll look and see this trespasser.
(Man sees the shape of the Shadow and begins to be sucked away.)
Man: *screams* ... wha....t are... you doing... to me?
Shadow: You are a foolish man.
This was freaking awesome. We read it in both classes and it was just fun to perform. Good job.
ReplyDeleteAction: -Man: He wants the shadow to get out of his house.
ReplyDelete-Shadow: Wants to collect the man's soul.
Conflict: The shadow won't leave because he wants the man's soul.
* Event: The man ends up losing his soul because he thinks that the shadow is playing a joke.
Changes: I think I could have made it longer, it seems like I rushed it. I could change the man's personality a little bit to be more scared and serious.
I'm Hungry!!!
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