Film Analysis

Batman Begins
Ordinary World:  Bruce grows up, falls in pit and gets scared of bats.  Parent's die, Bruce is arrested.
Call to Adventure:  Bruce wants to take revenge on his parents.
Refusal:  He doesn't know how to do it, doesn't want to kill.
Mentor:  His mentor shows up and teaches him how to fight.
Crossing the Threshold:  Bruce becomes Batman.
Tests:  Batman is lead on a chase for scarecrow and his parents killer.
Inmost Cave:  Plans to fight Scarecrow, resistance to the gas.
Ordeal:  Fight in Arkham, kills mentor in the train.
Reward:  Saves Gotham.
Road Back:  Batman returns as Bruce.
Resurrection:  Bruce has conquered his fear of bats.
Elixir:  Batman is a hero as well as a police target.  Batman gets attention.

My 50 word story

I need to go to school today.  The school-yard bully beats on me a couple of times.  And finally on the way home, I see an old man, at least seventy, preaching on the street corner.  "The world is coming to an end!" he declared.  And so it did...

Blurbs

Love Story - Taylor Swift
Romeo and Juliet want to be together, but the rivalry of their parents won't allow them too.  Juliet waits for Romeo to come and save her so they can live happily together.

Love the way you lie - Rihanna
Mr. man treated his wife like crap.  He wants her to forgive him.  She is about to leave and he pours his heart out to her and promises not to hurt her again.


King of Anything - Sara Bareilles
Mr. guy doesn't allow Sara to say what she wants, or do what she wants.  She says that she doesn't need someone to rule over her life and she wants to get away.

Horse with No Name by America

Mr. man rides his horse through the desert and describes the things that he sees around him.  After nine days, he reaches an ocean.  At the ocean he lets his horse go to move freely.

Whiskey lullaby: Brad paisley & Allison Krauss

Mr. soldier goes off to war.  When he returns, he finds that his wife cheated on him.  He decides to drink until he dies.  When he dies, his wife feels guilty and drinks until she dies also.

Six Word Memoirs

10.  That is too big for me.
9.  Friends should stand with each other.
8.  Ice cream can solve any problem.
7.  I do not love you enough.
6.  The best part was the credits.
5.  School sucks, almost all the time.
4.  Lost for 10 years, finally back.
3.  I have been waiting for you.
2.  Lost treasure, found it in Germany.
1.  Man goes down with her ship.

Bs'ing this assignment, wha?... I mean love story

Taylor Swift
Love Story

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Plot:  Romeo and Juliet want to be together, Juliet wants to run away, Romeo needs to save Juliet, they marry.

 Character:  Juliet, Romeo.... father, crowd

Conflict:   Romeo and Juliet want to be together, Juliet's father won't let them.

Theme:  True love

SETTING!!!:  Party, balcony....

Final Existence

A man awakens from his sleep during the night from a flash of lightning.  He hears something moving out in the hallway, what sounded like heavy boots hitting the floor on every step.  Finally, he hears the door slowly creek open.  He didn't dare look over at what was entering the room.

Man: Who... who is there?

(He could only hear the footsteps getting closer)

Man:  You should not be in here.

(The footsteps stop next to his bed)

Man:  Who are you?

(Silence)

Man:  Why don't you answer me?

Shadow:  I have come for something... Important.

Man:  Listen, if you want something, come by during the day.  I'm being generous to you by allowing you to  leave right now.  If you don't, I will have to get the authorities.

Shadow:  I will not leave until I collect what I have come for.

Man:  I asked you kindly before but this is your final warning.  GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!

Shadow:  Only a fool will stand up to his enemy alone...  Only a fool will stare straight in his enemies eyes alone.

Man:  Oh, so now you are my enemy?  I don't even know you.

Shadow:  No man knows me... I do not exist in this world... for them...

Man:  Who are you pretending to be?  You are not amusing me.

Shadow:  The others like you will get their turn.  For now, it is your time.

Man:  Time for what?

Shadow:  Time to end time.

Man:  Now you make no sense, you can't just end time.

Shadow:  This is what makes you a fool.  The final test has come.

Man:  So this is a test now?

Shadow:  Look me in the eyes and you will see your answer.

The man turns to face the intruder.  The shadow wore dark robes and a hood which covered its face in darkness.  Lightning strikes as the man gazes into the hood of the intruder revealing the most hideous eyes gazing back at him.  The man begins to feel light headed and suddenly feels as if he was ripped apart like a dozen spears have just pierced his heart.  The shadow lifts his arm toward the man sitting in amazement and torture, particles of dust begin to leave the mans body and collect in the hand of the shadow.

Man:  Argghhhh!  What are you doing to me?

Shadow:  Taking the soul of a fool.

Man:  Make it stop!  Please!  It hurts! Argghh!  Make it s...

Shadow:  One chance should be enough...

The man began to fade, his time was rapidly coming to an end.  He continued to scream until he was no longer existing.  He was taken from reality and memory, not one person will recall him ever living there in that custom-built house.  Wait what house?

Final Existence

A man awakens from his sleep during the night.  He hears something moving out in the hallway, and finally he hears the door slowly creek open.  He didn't dare look over at what was entering the room.

Man: Who is there?

(Silence)


Man:  I know you're there.

(Silence)

Man:  Who are you?

(Silence)

Man:  What are you doing here?

Shadow:  I am hungry.

Man:  You are hungry?  That's why you break into my home?

Shadow:  I have no choice.

Man:  I'll give you ten seconds to get out of my house, or I'll call the police.


Shadow:  That won't be necessary... I do not obey your kind.

Man:  Haha my kind?  What kind of person are you?


Shadow:  I'm not.

Man:  ... Just get out of my house!

Shadow:  I will not leave, I have not done what I have come for.

Man:  And what is that?

Shadow:  I need to collect.


Man:  Collect what?  Food?

Shadow:  ...Souls...

Man:  Haha... souls!  It's in the middle of the night, stop playing jokes!

Shadow:  No jokes...

Man:  No jokes? Haha.  How do I know if it's not a joke?

Shadow:  Look at me... and lose your soul.

Man:  Haha fine, I'll look and see this trespasser.

(Man sees the shape of the Shadow and begins to be sucked away.)

Man:  *screams* ...  wha....t are... you doing... to me?

Shadow:  You are a foolish man.

The man was soon gone.  No longer existing, in memory or in reality.  Not one person would remember him, he never lived in that house... what house?

Bad poetray, WHAT?!?! (Bad Poetry)

This was my most favorite day... with that class with the lizard and... that bacon!  It didn't go so well, so I leftid.  And the rest of the day was horrible too.  It was suppost ta be my pay day yo, with all that dollars.  They just decidedid not ta pay me anymo today.  They say I'm not good at poetray and I write more on those... watcha people do things in books.  They is wrong!!

Rock Out!! (Direct Orders)

Rock out like you just won one million dollars.  Rock out like you live in a big castle.  Rock out like a rocker rocks out on stage.  Rock out like Rocky.  Rock out like you would after your first date or kiss.  Rock out like a starving man came across a random meal.  Rock out like you just aced the hardest class in school.  Rock out like you got a 36 on the ACT.  Rock out like you just became the most popular person in your school.  Rock out like your parents just left for vacation for two weeks.  Rock out like you have all the time in the world to yourself.  Rock out like your listening to your favorite rock song.  Rock out like school got out for a long weekend.  Rock out like you just finished a school project and don't have to worry about it anymore.  Rock out like you just finished all of your homework.  This is your time to rock out!  Don't let it go to waste!  It may never come again!  Rock out like your life depended on it!!

Shake the Dust

     This is for the people who walk around the Earth blind and don't know where they are going.  This is for the indecisive.  For the people who don't have a clue of what they truly want.  Shake the dust.  This is for the guilty who drown in their mistakes.  For the criminals.  This is for the people who want to forget their past.  Shake the dust.  This is for the procrastinators who bring chemistry books into an English classroom.  For the people who don't clean up their messes.  This is for the people who have to be told multiple times to understand something.  Shake the dust.  This is for the people who have no respect.  This is for the people who don't care.  And for the people who care too much.  Shake the dust.  This is for the jocks.  For the nerds.  This is for the rebellious.  Shake the dust.  This is for the people who think they are too cool for everyone else.  For the selfish.  For the people who don't take education seriously.  Shake the dust.  This is for the quiet and the shy.  For the people who don't live life like they could... to the fullest.  This is for the people who hide themselves from others.  Shake the dust.  This is for the people who pretend to be someone else.  For the people who hide behind their objects (cell phones, ipods, etc.) hoping to get respect.  Shake the dust.  This is for the people who don't shake the dust.  For the people who don't shake it hard enough.  Shake the dust...

I'm Thinking About You...

     I'm thinking about you...  I'm thinking about you like a dog thinks about a bone.  Like a bone thinks about dirt.  Like dirt thinks about rain.  I am thinking about you like rain thinks of clouds.  Like clouds think of wind.  Like a boy thinks about a girl.  I'm thinking about you like an airplane thinks of wind.  Like a bird thinks of wind.  Like a skydiver thinks of... parachute failure.
     I'm thinking about you like a rock thinks of bigger rocks.  Like the bigger rocks think of boulders.  like boulders think of... falling off cliffs.  I'm thinking about you like a paper thinks of a pencil.  Like a pencil thinks of writing.  Like writing thinks of stories.  I'm thinking about you like a radio thinks of music.  Like music thinks of tunes.  Like tunes think of musicians.  I'm thinking about you like a married couple thinks of love.  Like love thinks of hearts.  Like hearts think of... blood clots.
     It doesn't matter what I am doing right now as long as I am thinking about you!  I am taking my time to think about you, right now, so you are very special to me!  I am thinking about you!

Love is... Top 10 List

10.  Love is a sofa.

9.  Love is two hands holding each other.

8.  Love is a key.

7.  Love is a fresh brownie.

6.  Love is a door, it opens up a new room.

5.  Love is hardbound book, it has a unique story.

4.  Love is a gateway.

3.  Love is a light bulb, it will eventually die out.

2.  Love is a pair of dice.

1.  Love is an Eraser, it slowly rubs away.

Introduction

      I am that one guy, don't you remember?  I like to write and took this class to enjoy it a little more.  I also want to get more experience in writing.  Creative writing will be a class I look forward to everyday.
      Out of school, I like to hang with my friends.  I enjoy playing sports, but I prefer soccer and enjoy playing it.  I like to air soft with friends and have wars against each other, which always turns out fun.  I like to play video games with others, which is the only way to make it fun.  I enjoy writing and have a few stories of my own, I look forward to this class during the year.